Cutting deep into the beds
to stuff in blood and guts.
This is all I want to do
because I am so damn bored.
No such luck in finding my companion
for my ever lasting life,
because no man seems to enjoy me
even though I am so nice.
A piece of information to you
that you should know,
is that no matter how long I look
the men never grow.
They all have the same size butts
and the same size guts,
not to mention that they are all dumb
and would rather eat crumbs
off of the kitchen floor then to
talk a bit to me,
even though I'm a good girl.
I must be mistaken
or they are fakin',
because I am hot
and they don't go for me.
It must be my style
and they aren't that wild.
I just can't believe
that they would rather
be with a dumb bitch
then be with me.
Fuck them all, see?
They don't like me.
I don't like them.
I'd rather like some
rather intelligent men.
Author notes
This is in humor because it's supposed to be like intelligent funny and I hope you readers like it and enjoy it...
I don't know what made me think of this, because men like me, anyway... oh well.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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gorgeous expression of tempestous lust and how you can become overcome with emotions. I really like the blood and guts bit, alot of people wouldn't be gutsy enough to include it. I like that you really put yourself out there!
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Thanks for the comment, Brian, and I can't seem to be able to go to your site, because it's parental for some reason...
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Well, you seem to have no confidence problem
that's not a bad thing. Im a big fan of freestyle, and i like how you incorporated with rhyme. I think some parts could be worded a little differently but thats just an opinion, but that's good because if we all wrote the same there would be no reason to read anyone else's writing. I'm sorry you can't seem to find anyone. You seem very nice. Guys are not how do you say... well guys can be asses. Nice Write
-Brian
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