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The Nonexistent Friend, Me

A -B-e-s-t- Friend?
I Don't Think So!

Another lonely day,
Another lonely night...


Look around,
Noone's found.


Would they
Care [[less]]
If I
Was dead?



I'm just their Nonexistent Friend.

Who'll still be there, for them to depend.


Used up!!

Not cared about





THE F*CKING WASTE OF TIME



...now i give up...

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we all know it true... whats the point going on? there is no point, i know!

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  • wandering roots
    July 5, 2008
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    oh and yeh forgot! again lol

  • wandering roots
    July 5, 2008

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    damn this how i feel everynight when i go into my bed.. and everynight i rage a new emotion, its fucked up and im glad you wrote it cause it makes me see that at least i dont feel like that alone, i love your writing idk its just so real you know? like its real emotion real words.. just real.. i love that so much, thank you!


  • Green Manalishi gold member
    September 22, 2007
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    btw

  • Green Manalishi gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    Very Deep!

    Your feelings are awesome! Isn't it such a relief to share this with the world? I really wish that I had found poetry to help me through being a teen, but I only had D&D...

    You'll find that the more things you do for yourself- learning guitar, eating organic, working out, going Taoist, etc- the better life can be. Feel free to contact me on this. I'll be happy to be your big brother (I'm the oldest of three, and a father of an 11 year old boy and a 2 year old girl). Take care, live well.


  • BeautifulDisaster9
    August 23, 2007

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    Whoa.

    I like this. I can totally relate. I'm glad it stopped you from cutting.

    I don't like hearing that you've hurt yourself, but I am glad you're honest with me.

    Miss talking to you all the time!!!

    Love you heaps and heaps.

    <3BD9


  • ShotgunSherri--
    August 23, 2007
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    loved it.
    very understandable...

    x.x.x


    • hopelessly-broken
      August 23, 2007
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      thank you hun! u dont really like this style but i like trying new things.

      take care xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • virtual-darkness
    August 22, 2007

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    hey there, long time no speak. are you ok cuz this poem sorta worried me a bit? its so true and i feel exactly the same. stay safe and take care of yourself. xoxo

    • hopelessly-broken
      August 23, 2007
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      thank you for caring. im alright now i guess. i was a bit angry and upset when i rote that, but it stopped me cutting so im happy with that!

      hope your alright, im soryr u feel the same... we'll talk soon, take care

      love HB
      xoxoxoxoxoxoxooxx

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