twilight casts a midnight blue
darker is the mist
heavens gates, heavens hue
opens in eternal bliss.
her skin is growing pale
her bodies sunken in
i remember all those times
i kissed her lips and chin.
bitter sweet the angels cry
and cry do i with them
to see me in this sovern state
im sure no others can relate.
a beauty soul that God will take
leaving silence in her wake...
Author notes
had a dream where someone very special to me died... didnt like it, but here is the result...
Please tell me what you think
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Sweet!
In the third line, is it "Heaven's gates, heaven's hue?" and a typo? Or is it poetically without the apostrophe? Either way, it's still a beautiful piece of work. I would give it more than two stars, but this stupid rating thing is fighting me. -
Beautifully sad
Honey...this isnt about me is it? Is it that dream you told me about? I love you. We're so far away even though i could walk to you in under an hour. Your parents are killing me! Why do they insist upon us being separated?? THIS ISNT FAIR!! I need you, i miss you, and all our parents can do is sit diabolically in their triumph and rejoice in our misery!! I'm gonna go write, release this anger a little. I love you my pinto! Please call!!
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