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[[Sometimes]] I Sit And....

Sometimes I sit, and pray for the courage.

Why don't I?
I don't [know]

Something stops me. But I don’t know .W.h.a.t.


It’s not a
  ..: person :..

I know that for sure


Something inside me wont
Let me press
d
o
w
n

                        To finally feel
                          The very
                      Last bit of pAiN!!


&& finally be rid of this...


never



ending



~S H A M E~





((Please give me THE COURAGE, ))

_cOuRaGe_  _Of_  _ThE_  _BLADE_

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meh... tell me what you think if you want. i dont like it so watever

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  • Green Manalishi gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    :D

    No one can write about this (cutting) like you! The changes in your format are wonderful, as are your expressions. In fact, cutting poems usually turn me away as a rule, but yours are the exception. Somehow, you keep them as interesting as your life must be.

    Your might enjoy one of my new pieces: http://allpoetry.com/poem/3554090.

    Luv ya!


    • Green Manalishi gold member
      October 30, 2007
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      ?

      If that doesn't work, my poem is called "Live By The Sword, Die By The Sword".


  • BeautifulDisaster9
    August 23, 2007

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    LOVE IT!!!!

    AMAZING. AMAZING. AMAZING. I LOVE IT.


    I BOW DOWN TO YOU.

    Seriously though, I really like this sis, I can SO relate.

    Well done!!!!!!

    Love you heaps.

    <3BD9


  • ShotgunSherri--
    August 23, 2007

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    how can you not like this!?!?!
    i LOOOOOVE it. HEAPS!!
    tis terrific; a masterpiece! =]

    x.x.x
    ♥ always


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    August 22, 2007
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    Hmmmm...interesting form Hope you are ok, and remember I love you


    • hopelessly-broken
      August 23, 2007
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      yeah i dont like that style, its not my type of thing. but it helped me express myself and thats the only reason i right, so im glad i rote it!

      love you
      xoxoxoxox

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