Emphasized
through artist eyes
winsome as a lullaby
Gaze to gain
poetic ways
lost in pensive yesterdays
Heart-strings strum
and feather's fly
love flutters within her sigh
Wisdom sought
virtue bestows
gossamer bronze upon gold
Portrait placed
in author's pen
I find the beauty within
A brushes view...
Author notes
Picture By: - Jean Dubuffet
A contest entry
- PIF - Metaphor Mania!!! (Prompt) by Mad Moon.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Superb! Love the take on the prompt, poet. The first stanza ROCKS! And it just keeps going from there....never letting up. What a beautifully penned piece, my friend. I so enjoyed this one! Thanks for your entry, and Good Luck!
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What a poetic intellect of heart has that brush! Nice even flow and an over all lovely piece.
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Great poem poet. Love the flow of your words. Keep your pen flowing! Kindest wishes
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beautiful
how very beautiful these words from you are. almost had me in tears. thank you for sharing your heart with me. viyanna rosemare
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NICELY WRITTEN
the flow and rhyme is extrordinaire....this was a lovely piece...enjoyed the read
peace, luvpoet
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beautiful combinations of words...
very vivid imagery... very well done, poet! good luck in the contest!
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Your words are lovely and calming, beautifully written with vivid imagery. A wonderful job, Timothy. Hugs, Patricia
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I find the beauty within
your every line poeticweaver.
Smile,
Judy
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Ah, it's posted now!
"Heart-strings strum
and feather's fly
love flutters within her sigh"...
~sighs~ this is beautiful...I love the flow and rhyme of this...done very well
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nice to see you here too..lol
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Awe
Thanks hun. Nice to see you too!
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I thinnk if I think any harder, my brain will stop working properly! very creative
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I can so relate. lol..
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