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Dead Zone

So, you want to go?
Go, then
I am not enough?
Find another
If tears are what you're after
Then shed some
If pain is your affectation
You are the master

Listen to the beating
Of a drummer only you hear
Read a thousand books
and find your comforts there
Words that passed between us
only echo in this room now

Silence is a killer
a most effective one
Inside my own head is the poison
your job is already begun
Don't worry about the details
No one knows
or cares, if they do

So if you want to go
Then go
Waiting for it only makes it worse...



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Goodbyes suck, even when there isn't one...

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  • Debbysmiles gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    You did an awesome job expressing the pain of a leaving that is not wanted and the courage it takes to let them while still knowing what is to come. Blessings. Debby


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    The sun will shine again, to begin a  new day

    so the heart of man will feel with love again

    well done


  • Nobody126
    September 1, 2007

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    Very Nice and sweet

    dear Madam, this is a very sweet and bold expression...there is a kinda fun in finding some one dear and there is also an amazing pain in losing some one dear...after a long time share of life and dreames.this is so beautifully written.