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Darfur's spirits

 

 



Dead children of Darfur
Where will their spirits go
What happens to the flies

That pick the corners of their eyes

Will these helpless little waifs
Who know of famine and of war
One day not hear mother's cry
As they watch their children die

I see them on the news
Haunted empty, big brown eyes
Bones poke through paper skin
As in death their peace begins

And will all these hapless souls -
These wretched lives so full of strife
Demand why humanity underplays
Such a precious thing as life

 

 

 

 

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  • wordsmith gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    You clearly have deep feelings and thoughts about this tragic condition even if it was a contest. You elicit intense reactions to the very powerful images. Your questions continue the view. You have made your point!


  • individuality gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    yeah i see those pictures with flies landing on people's faces and they do not flinch, as if they are used to it happening, if that was me i'd me smacking my head


  • Floorboards
    August 26, 2007

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    Hi, honeybunny, I think this poem is excellent, especially the third stanza, very strong imagery.
    Everyone does seems apathetic nowadays, and you've certainly highlighted that here.
    Well done my friend, sad write,
    Alex.


  • Wesley Storer
    August 25, 2007

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    Proof positive

    That the world is out of control. Best Wishes! How's life over there in jolly old? I'm waiting to see the new movie coming out about your lovely Queen!

  • RockChick
    August 22, 2007
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    This was a really deep and meaningful write, Sara. I believe you really got the emotions out on this one... I wish you the best of luck in this contest. I also liked how this flowed.

    I also hope that Darfur gets out of this very unfortunate circumstance that it's in, because they deserve better than they're getting.

    Keep up the damn good work, Sara!


  • capricornpoet
    August 22, 2007

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    children's sadness

    All around the world children suffer...
    sad lyrical prose, make one wonder why all this suffering in a rich world.


  • myorama
    August 22, 2007
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    A very poignant piece and so well worded. Good luck in the contest.

  • Bad Bill
    August 22, 2007

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    A powerful poem which really highlights the apathy and even criminal neglect shown by the world in the face of such human tragedy.

    Bill


  • leo2
    August 21, 2007

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    The reality of neglect is something we all should be ashamed of but there's so little one person can do except sympathize and pray. Best of luck in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

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