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-c-o-c-a-i-n-e- && \c\a\n\d\y\

The needle of cocaine,

The razor sweats of blood.

My tears are like candy,

They are so sweet to you.

 

My romance is toxic,

It's like acid,

It allows you to go on a trip.

 

All is fair in love and war,

Tragic,

As if a shot gun to my head.

 

This is a tale tell heart,

Of Romeo and Juliet.

 

I will pick the rose,

The oh so black rose.

 

Alice will help me,

And lead the way.

As the running shoes,

Get scuffed.

 

The pixie sticks taste oh so good,

The chocolate isn't so sweet.

 

Just go ask Alice,

And she will lead you the way.

From the candy dreamed tears,

To the black roses for me.

 

 

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  • SymphonyOfTheWake
    August 22, 2007

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    This was hard for me to read, concidering the fact that I used drugs for about 7 years. I'm a huge fan of freestyle structure. You do an amazing job with this piece. I feel a lot of undertones in this. "All is fair in Love and War"

    -Brian


    • Ignis Corpus
      August 22, 2007
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      im sorry it was hard for you to read, and im glad you think i did an amazing job though i feel this wasnt the best of my pieces


  • Anfractuous
    August 22, 2007
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    A wonderful poem...but it's sad...


  • hobo-candy
    August 22, 2007
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    i like i really do...good luck babe