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Alone Tonight

i lay alone tonight
the only warmth is my own
i learn to long to night
and i long that you are close
all of the pain inside
decides to let out loose
it had to choose tonight
because tonight i loose you


chorus:
my soul is breaking
my body is weak
from this constant aching
to have you with me
you were the last hope
that was in my world
but i'm sure that you know
that there isn't anymore
:chorus


i lay awake tonight
unable to find sleep
it stays away tonight
and softly illudes me
i soon loose the right
to think what is best for me
all i can think of tonight
is how i hate being so free


chorus:
my soul is breaking
my body is weak
from this constant aching
to have you with me
you were the last hope
that was in my world
but i'm sure that you know
that there isn't anymore
:chorus


i lay fearful tonight
scared i'll grow old alone
my tears fall slow tonight
this house is nolonger a home
and now i loose the sight
of why life was so real
my mind gets loose tonight
mistaking that i can't feel



chorus:
my soul is breaking
my body is weak
from this constant aching
to have you with me
you were the last hope
that was in my world
but i'm sure that you know
that there isn't anymore
:chorus


my heart broke tonight
it took the rest of me with it
i die alone tonight
but now it feels so right

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  • DevinCora
    August 22, 2007

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    ~sings very loudly and off key~ i love to read lyrics they excite me.... it was very good.... except for the ending, i just couldnt get into.....

    my heart broke tonight
    it took the rest of me with it
    i die alone tonight
    but now it feels so right


    It sounded kind generic compared to the rest of the write, so you might want to tune that up a little bit, but other than that it was awesome!!!!!