Doggies are so cute
and kitties are so adorable
hamsters are so cuddly
just like my old gerbil
Puppies are cuter
but doggies are special
they mean everything in the world to me
just like any other animal
Kitties are so quiet
they are so sweet to have too
even though they sleep through the day
there are alot of things that we can do!
hamsters are soft and warm
usually they can be very mean
but its better than nothing
and it can be your average king or queen
gerbils can be evil
or they can be sweet
just like any other animal in the world
its just like love and love is a wonderful treat
A contest entry
- Purrfect Pet Poetry - for ages 13 and under by thelordreigns.
450 points, ended August 22, 2007, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love animals so much. Good thing that I have 2 cats named Maggie and Smokey. I will always keep them. I love Maggie and Smokey very and very much. They are like my kids. I do not have kids,....maybe some day.
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I LOVE ANIMALS!!! I currently have 3
s and 2 
s. I used to have goldfish, frogs, guinea pigs, hamsters, and gerbils. I loved your poem. I did see one error that you might want to correct. In line 12, change "is" to "are".
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Yes, all our pets are such blessings and so different. They really are little bunches of love!
Thanks so much for writing this great poem and entering it in my contest.
- joanne
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