Your red checks flushed by passion
I caress your full figure as you plead for regress
I refuse
My lips, tongue, body circles all that you desire
And you shudder
From the orgasmic tremors of the complete sensations
Of me, on you
Two monochromatic bodies pulsating at the very touch
Tremors arising from the very depths of our thoughts
Of desire
She becomes limber as I spread her as wide as she allows
Pleasure and pain shares a feast of bliss and submission
While I pollinate her sacred flower with my lips
Brown succulent lips that you left your passionate marks
To claim me, inscribe upon me
While I submit
To your yearnings of lustful foreplay, licentious attractions
To this forbidden Allure
As my darkness eclipse your day,
Dawn sets, in exhausted ecstasy
Author notes
4.) I love Erotica.
Came from left field
A contest entry
- Think You Can Make Me Explode? by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended August 21, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show Me How by Paulies Cracker.
430 points, ended November 6, 2007, 25 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TELL ME DONT SHOW ME..... by pain is strength.
525 points, ended December 27, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Damn, Hot, Hot
This is one hot poem here, (panting) you wrote the hell out of this piece, you had me wishing that I was that woman you were refering too. I am going to have stop reading some of these sensual poems for a minute, I have to cool down, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Player Sublime
Just like my son to love all the females...excellent write....Mom
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All I got to say is
HOT & Very Passionate piece you got here. Loved everything about it
CC
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thanks CC. I liked it to
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wow.... this is without a dout.. a wonderful passionate,poem... i loved every word that i was
reading!!!
you did exactly as i asked for and i appreciate it...
please.... everytime i add a contest.. enter it with
your wonderful writting!!!!
best of luck in the contest,
love behind bars28
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oh wow!! this is AMAZING!!! i love Erotica and this was love after i read it... it was great!! good luck! and thank you sooo much!
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Thanks so much for the trophy and the kind words
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AWESOME
WOW!
Breathles and speechless
Love ~sugar~
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* he blushed with glee*
Thank you so much!!
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BREATH TAKING
Found myself holding my breath and omg what a sigh!...Cold shower time!...To submit to ones lover can truly be exhausted ecstasy...You have penned a Master Piece my friend
Should have gone for gold!
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I know, I thought so to but I'm a bit bias ((smile)).
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Beautifully Penned
and very erotic thoughts to ponder; I think this should of been a gold piece, but nevertheless its a winner...eres magnífico y esto es perfectamente maravilloso. ¿Me pregunto si la lluvia lo leyó? excelente.....novy
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Ay dios mio, tu hablas espanol tambien? What a talent you are I think so too but its in the eye of the presenter. I think I blew the top two away ...........mykey
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Yeah, that's hot. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck. *rose* Storm
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Thank you so much ~ Mykey
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Im down....
full~figure women RULE.....I am a full course meal....my friend, wow, I love this write, and I am sure Storm will too...she is indeed a Beautiful person.
~Ephiphany
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LOL!!! girl I have to show FFW love. They give you their soul, mind and ooooooooo that body. She wanted to explode, I had to run it.
~winks & waves ~ My-Key~
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Holy Heat Wave
WOW
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LOL!!! I had to do it. I stayed away from serious erotic but her challenge was make me explode. I had to get deep (no pun intended)
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