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feels like fall

I woke today,
with chills running up and down my spine,
the hairs stood up on my arms,
my feet was tickled from

the cool, fall-like air.

I marveled at the bumps that

grew on my arms,

was pleased to breathe

cool, smooth, fresh air.

I dared myself to streak around the house,

only to cover up if I got too cold.

 

I went to work on this cloudy, dreary, day

but had sunshine on my mind.

I kept smiling,

but people didn't know why.

I was in good spirits, cheerful,

feeling finally able to relax

in the comfort of beautiful nature!

 

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After a rough couple of weeks, it finally feels like fall is near... feeling blessed to walk without having to wipe sweat from my eyes. Blah, too bad it's going to end in a couple of days.

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  • nell
    August 24, 2007
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    *hi*
    I reckon that the seasons should consist of just spring and autumn, wouldnt be to hot or cold..just nice.. and perfect... autumn is my favourite time of year... i really like the upbeat feeling to the poem, made me smile..

    Shanelle


  • smiley
    August 21, 2007
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    wow

    WOW aren't you the lucky one... we are just beginning summer over here.

    Yvonne

    • Cwm
      August 21, 2007
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      Too bad...

      ugh! Good luck...