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Romance of Incognito

        Incognito,             to not be                   *

      seen, though        seen without                *

   mistake or simple knowledge that the         *

  hidden desire is actually there. What lies      *

  hidden in the heart, will only lay aching       *

    the head.  As the watcher tries to tell         *

      but chokes on their drying tongue.           *

          This is the daily romance of                 *

             Incognito.  The one who                   *

                 loves, though she                         *

                   take the steps                            *

                       to seal it.                               *

                         Loves,                                 *

                                                             though she refuses to try for this love.

                                     Only time will tell what will befall,

                                                                                      in the fate of Incognito.

Author notes

Best of luck to you NinaRaz. Honestly, I've heard this kind of story several times from the girls I hang out with at school or at other random places. The story that they like someone but don't know if it's the correct time to tell the person.

I'll tell you the same thing I normally tell them. First off, I'm no expert, so don't take my word as the final ultimate truth. But, a guy doesn't "come to his senses." We like it where we are and feel no need to change.

If he hasn't approached you yet, then you have to approach him. That's all there is to it.

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  • Cora Jane16
    June 8, 2008

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    I loved this poem, it made me see things from another point of view, and if we weren't dating my Andrew, I daresay I would have gone out and asked you out directly after I read it. I love you!


  • HerbalGoat
    August 27, 2007

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    I like the way you did this, in the shape of a heart and all, but I was more on the lines of looking for something personal. From your notes, and the way that you have written this poem, I am taking it as you are a guy, and that is fine, no problem with that, but I am sure you have gone through this yourself with girls at one point. Anyway, back to the poem, I love the feel of this, especially how you have created a wanting mood while using he title in your poem, which I never did ask for, but nice touch.