You carry a magic within you,
Did you know that?
In the beginning I was infatuated merely with your name
A name that is influenced by romance, power, and mystery
All mixed together-it's beautiful.
I was nearly speechless when I first collided into
Your magnetic spirit, your inescapable presence.
A few words have been spoken between us
Mostly words in jest, or in my attempts to
See another of your contagious, playful smiles
Or learn more about your nature.
Now I search for you wherever I roam
And I know you have caught me looking way too many times
Maybe you've already noticed your not-so-secret admirer
Sublety never was my strong suit.
I think now I am treading into that perilous land
That we call L-O-V-E
But in all seriousness,
The sad fact is
I don't even know you
Author notes
When you find yourself in a hole, STOP DIGGING!!!"
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A contest entry
- Just Me...And You... by FlipperSwitch.
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i really liked some of the words and rhymes you used in this poem. Especially:
"not-so-secret admirer"
I can just relate to that so much. It made me feel like my old self again for a second. Thank you for the entry. -
This is a very intresting piece and very well written
(( just wondering what that exciting name was. ))
Thanks for your entry and Good Luck in the contest -
That is a really intriguing poem; I especially like the ending because it's true but it could mean so much more than it actually does to me. Thanks for the entry
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