I think am falling
I hear a feeling calling
Yet how could that be?
Emotions are dead to me
But it is there and it persists
An odd intrusion I can’t resist
Something strange from within
Happiness! I thought was a sin
Oh god what am I to do?
I am falling in love too!
I feel a glow forming
My heart is a warming
What was once ice?
Is thawing into something nice
Please I am lost
I fear the cost
Can it be true?
Or am I insane too?
Oh no the dark is receding
Where is this feeling leading?
I can’t fight my heart anymore
Love wins unlocking the final door
Whoa this is so unreal
I didn’t know love could heal?
But does she love me in return?
I need to know to learn
No maybe…I fear
Do I really want to share?
Yes I think I do…
For I know I love you.
Author notes
I dreamt last night about my past, and a someone that made me feel this way, though we have long since parted ways, we are still friends. might be hope for my messed up heart, but thats for me to know
A contest entry
- Rhyme Only by piccola.
900 points, ended August 30, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest its all I ask.
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Congratulations on your bronze award and an excellent poem That richly deserves its recognition Well done an enjoyable read
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I read this poem earlier and enjoyed it..but now that I have read your latest poem 'Lured Lost and Devoured' I wonder if they arent connected..especially now that you have had time to re-evaluate the dream...maybe Im reading into it too much..but I did enjoy both pieces greatly and I like the idea that they are joined...one sweet and innocent of something past....the other inner tragedy we have to live with on a daily basis and how sometimes you just cant mix the two though apart of you desperatly wants too...good luck in the contest
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well kindred...so much for this being an anonymous contest when your name is blaring at me from the bottom of the page...sigh. Good rhyme though I feel it needs line breaks.
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This is very beautiful. I like this poem hehe i did not except this type of right form you but it is good Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
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This is beautiful. I think there's hope even if you're heart is a bit confused. This is truly a beautiful poem full of hope for love. I loved it. Good luck in the contest.
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