What's the difference between a bad dream and a nightmare?
At least when it's a dream, I don't have pain
'Cause you are there to keep me warm
And protect me from all evil sworn
And to keep from going insane.
What's the difference between a bad dream and a nightmare?
In the dream, the atmosphere is mostly bright
Sure, there may be some turbulance
But you show up in every instance
And act as my own shining knight.
And then when I wake up,
And I see you in real life
You're still loving me
And protecting me from greif and strife
So the difference between a bad dream and a nightmare
The answer I am sure is in plain veiw
In a bad dream the rain may fall
The world looks bleak and the evils brawl
But the nightmare only begins when I loose you.
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Wow
Now I expected something ttoally different like the actual differece between the tweo but I really loved this even more! I didn't get bored with how I would have written it Lmao but any ways well this is just a bliss-filled beautiful poem and well its a poem that really rocks ya hard to the core and also really kicks ass! I like this because you really showed how much you love this perosn being around. I also love this because you really have made good sense and logic to this poem. nice work and keep it up
Signed, Paul
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I like this, nice wordplay, good repetition. Well done. very sentimental.
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