silence of darkened eyes
open into night’s loss
sing a song of joy’s demise
lying open, counting costs
blackened tears draining down
from eyes that stare forever
into these tears I drown
a gauze covered endeavor
pain of lost illusions
refine the burning stroke
coming to the grim conclusion
that what is lost is broke
silent screams
of destitute horror
pooling in extremes
is there a restorer
In a list
A contest entry
- Let Your Imagination Run Free #21 (picture inspired) by Seeking Peace.
450 points, ended September 2, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well done on a great piece, I am not usually a fan of rhyme but this is an exception, well done
I wish you the very best of luck for this contest, thanks for entering
Karen -
Beautifully Penned
excellent write from the inspiration, nice rhyming also................novy
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Magnificent arrangement of words. It just pulls you in through imagery and emotions of what is being read. Fantastic creation. Good luck in the contest
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'pain of lost illusions
refine the burning stroke
coming to the grim conclusion
that what is lost is broke'
Loss of pain, wrapped in gauze..silent is her plea for help...yet none come!
Amazing write my friend. Good luck in your contest ~Sie
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