There, on the grill of every big truck,
in the well-spaced rest stop, were promises
and prayers of every being
that ever begged, in their cocoon,
for a second chance.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - Metaphor Mania!!! (Prompt) by Mad Moon.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OMG!!! This is SO wonderfully fresh and original!! I adore where you went with this, my friend! So few words, so much deep meaning to contemplate... Thanks so much for the entry, and Good Luck!
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thank you so much madmoon....this is a favorite of mine. On our trip back from the West Coast, every rest stop we stopped at, I woudl go and collect the beautiful butterflies the engines suck against the grill. I have soem beautiful promises.
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Hi, nice one, short and to the point, liked this a lot, all the best in the comp,
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