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dog house


I'm in a dog house..  I'm in it for the one i love the one and only pug. its raining so hard and its so cold. but i will suck it up for that one little pug. who stood with me through thick and thin who never let me go even when i was drowning. that one little pug knew whats its job was, to protect and to love even when it seemed impossible. so for now i sit with that one little pug.

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  • BeautifullyBroken42
    January 28, 2008

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    josie look at the rules next time! ya know username and option number! do it before the contest ends.

    I already commented once so i won't do it again.
    ~Ruth~
    No offence! Luv ya

  • Hypocritical Oath
    November 6, 2007
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    Not baaad, not bad at all

    A rather good write, though help me understand it better, what's a pug?


  • BeautifulNitemare
    September 4, 2007

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    I need the option # and my quote

    Sorry, but you have been DQ. You failed to follow the rules. You can re-enter with my quote and the option #. Thank you.

  • Virgoan
    August 31, 2007

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    Nicely written freeverse.

    Thanks so much for entering my contest. I wish you all the best and I encourage you to keep on writing.

    >>>VIRGOAN


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 22, 2007
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    this is good, would be better with line breaks,
    but the feeling is pour like the rain.


  • aboomer silver member
    August 21, 2007

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    Adorable pic! And I like what this says and I agree - your pets are there for you, no matter what. And it's nice to know that you are in the dog house also - rewarding, so to speak, the pet's devotion.
    Thank you for your entry.


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    August 21, 2007
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    SWEET!

    cute poem josie, but ya kinda need to use lines not story writing. Lilly is soooooooo cute!

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