Such a special person,
blessed all around.
I love myself soooo much...
nothing can bring me down.
Every morning I wake up,
thanking God for this life.
No matter how much pain I'm in...
I was blessed to see the next day of light.
Family and friends,
stay by my side.
As long as they are there...
I'm blessed to have this life.
I love myself.
A contest entry
- B.G.T Y by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended September 8, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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What a lovely positive attitude to have.
Thankful of what you have.
~sugar~
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thank you for entering this contest. This is quite an upbeat and positive attitude to have. We should never forget that we are all deserving of the best life has to offer. Unfortunately it is not always available to us.......but as long as we become our own cheerleaders, yes , we can remain positive.
thanks again,
reenie
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This is a very warm and soul breather poem.
Best of luck and keep writing fellow poet
>>>VIRGOAN
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What a wonderful attitude to have. Thankful for what you have, even if in pain, mindful of your blessings, even if they're simple.
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You know, As many ppl I run across everyday; none of them have never spoke in such confidence and thankfulness that you do. You are a blessed soul that has so much to live for.
Great poem. And you keep this amazing attitude you have. So brilliant
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Very good!
Look at it in yhis form and tell me what you think! Just a little different to make it flow differently. Your friend
"BOO"
I "love" to "I do love" (3rd line)
Change "soooo" back to "so"
Every morning
that
I wake.
I thank GOD,
for this gift
of life!
No matter
how much
pain I'm in,
I am blessed
for my next
day of "LIGHT"!
For as long as family
and friends,
stay here by my side.
I am blessed
TO HAVE THIS LIFE!
I LOVE MYSELF!
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