I'm afraid...
afraid to fall away from you.
I'm afraid...
afraid to lose you, knowing that you listen to me,
afraid to fall away from you.
I'm afraid...
afraid to lose your love, your passion and trust,
afraid to fall away from you.
I love you with all of my heart...
never wanting to leave you, just keep you embraced in my arms.
Your beautiful mind, your beautiful heart...
I'm afraid you'll leave mine broken, shattered, lost, cold and in pain.
I'm afraid...
afraid to fall away from you.
Author notes
This is to my best friend. We have deep love between each other and know that this will be life-time love. I'm just afraid that we will part and I dont want to lose him.
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dear me- this explains a lot of what im feeling. its moved me. it truely did. the seperation of the two halfs of the sentence with the ...'s really brings the reader closer into the poem.
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this totally reminds me of what happened between me and my best friend, in a sense. her mom made her come back and live with her when she was happier here with me. i didnt want to let her go, she was so safe when she was with me, now i cant help her, or protect her..and i miss her...so bad
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Hmmm... I'm not exactly sure how this ties into Nightwish... but thanks for entering and good luck!
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Oh so beautiful and passionate. Very wonderful entry, tank you ever so much. :0
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That is a mutual feeling in a lot of bestfriends.
I like how you expressed yourself in this wonderful poem -
EXcellent Poetry!!
t I don't comunicate with many young girls or guys on live because I don't wany anyone thinking that I like the company of children. Unless I am giving sugestion on their poetry or in a manner teaching them how I write my poetry. I hope you don't take offense to this, They have to have exceptional poetry before I communicate with them. I saw that you had commented on my poetry last week. I had came to your site but looked at your age and went no futher. You do write good poetry however and I will read a few more of your poems. Thanks for your recent comments and keep writing in the manner that you write!
"BOO"
once again no offense intended.
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its beautiful and sweet =]
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