I want you to know that I still think about you from time to time
I NEED you to know that I sometimes wish you were still mine
That night replays over and over in my mind
The emotions so intense just had to come out of hide
The moment was perfect; I felt captured by your eyes
I was transfixed; Imprisoned by your side
I hate you for being there for me when I cried
Because it made it so much harder for me to see the truth from a lie
I know that to you, it may have simply been a fling
But you've left me wondering if you're the real thing
I guess all that I need to know is if I should try?...
Or...
If I should close the window, end it all; say "goodbye"?
Author notes
August 21, 2007
Dedicated to Curtis Braun
A contest entry
- When the waves break in the ocean. by Centri.
475 points, ended September 24, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Very good expression of the questions we ask after an intense experience, do we still think of it because it is meant to be or do we want what is not in front of us and is that human nature? Well done.
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This is a very good poem, you must have loved them dearly and had them hurt you for this to have occured. I am sorry for what happened to you, but this truly is a good poem.
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very good
the essence of love
is it true or blind?
such heartfelt passion for the love of another
alas, the core of life
"self-doubt"
i love this verse
it brings up so much
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i love it i can't agree any more with that.....when you just want to get out of a relationship but you can't get out i made a poem like this but no offence more heart wrenching only because i did more pain and that stuff but it is beautiful i'm amazed that no one has commeented on it yet great job i give the the best luck XOXOXO want dark XOXO
ttul8r untill then goodbye
cya
[great job!!!!]
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