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Blind Sided

Sensual satisfactions cause
beautiful pleasures to erupt.
Infatuations blind my heart
with simple treasures unfolding.

Cosmos invades with nature,
instincts color my silence.
Glazing mystical purities
within my busy nightlife.

Leaving silken luxuries
with darkened streams.
The flowing sadness I feel
painted upon my tearful soul.

 

Casting out hidden dreams... 

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Not to into writing right now and probably shows within my words...Sorry...

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  • vici377
    March 30, 2008
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    The flowing sadness I feel
    painted upon my tearful soul.

    you have some very powerful words here..love it...and I love how you ended it..making it..its own thought..its own line..to make you pay attention to it..love it..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..




  • Quiet places
    October 19, 2007

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    Touching Write!!

    Packed with emotion of all avenues, this images the roller coaster ride we sometimes go on in life and it's affect it has on our thoughts and emotions. My heart pours out to you my dear and you know I feel your confusion. This time is what real friends are for. You have many including me.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    Sis,
    Your work is wonderful as always. This piece is strong and moving. Great flow and word choice.
    Yet you are standing in so much darkness at this time. I am worried. Sending you love and prayers.
    Love,
    sis


  • Swan song gold member
    September 3, 2007

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    Your poems are packed with excellence I loved this writas well, You are crooning some wonderful poems here I am glad I stopped by


  • dustookie2
    August 23, 2007

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    Sis as i read the last line my thoughts went to the title and the beginning I feel the emotive play in my head tonight the sad heavy heart. You pen with a passion as you guide your readers on this journey with you and paint the background a pleasure thank you sis


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 22, 2007

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    You might not have been in the mood, but your words were, and this is a great poem with the pictures coming to life from screen to mind.


  • Kari gold member
    August 22, 2007

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    This really was beautifully sad. YOu did a wonderful job with it I wish you the best of luck in the contest


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    August 22, 2007
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    I love it. You have a way with any type of expression


  • Naridill
    August 22, 2007

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    Not matter your mood, you always cast such poetic poems on to those who read. This piece is another beautiful example of the emotions and imagery you are able to give life through words.


  • Laura
    August 22, 2007

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    yes they do seem to be picting that picture damn im sulking now lolol
    this is an amazing poem by an amazing person well done love xxx

  • deleteit
    August 21, 2007

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    I think you did a wonderful job with it. I am not quite sure what your interpretation is but I got the feel of pain masked by indulgences in or through addictions...be it temptations or whatever. Hiding the true heart of dreams desired. Either way, I found it to be remarkable and I like the impression I am left with after reading it. Good luck in the contest


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    everyone seems to be picking this picture and yet again you did a marvolous job with it bringing it to life and giving it a voice
    i loved what you got from it
    well done and best of luck

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