Speechless, as I came across
your emotions. I slipped by
and bled the tears you chose
never to express.
Healing, to escape what I cannot
fix. Presented extremes of
unfufilled desires, anger,
fears.
I learned all this from you.
My eyes the camera.
Capturing stills,labeling them;
an epilogue to what
I must never do.
A contest entry
- Let Your Imagination Run Free #21 (picture inspired) by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended September 2, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love the imagery in this piece, you have captured all that the picture provides so well in this one.
I wish you the very best of luck for this contest, thanks for entering
Karen -
very well written, apt imagery
great work
cheers
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Thank you so much for the comment!
LL
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Brilliant! If the visual art is the prompt, you aced this my lady. The imagery here is absolutely stunning and the quality of emotions is immeasurable. Beautiful, intense, and extremely well executed. I wish you all the best in the Comp.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Intriguing.
I was perusing the Newest poems this morning, looking for something unusual. This is interesting. I am especially impressed with the eyes being a camera. That caused me to do some pondering.
I like this.
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