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i have no clue =/

Everytime i see you you always seem to bring a smile to my face,
even when i was the deepest sad u always found a way.
But now that your gone i dont know what to do
i have always thought that when i grow older,
and look back at my tears that i would laugh not cry,
and everytime i look back at my laughter i would cry.
I wish you were here with me holding me tight
so i can forget everything that has happend to me.
I seem to always forget things when im with you,
i wanted to be with you back then when u asked
but i was afraid to give my heart away.
Now that your gone from me i regret it,
cuz everytime i close my eyes i only see you,
and now im so lonely and have no clue what to do..

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the title is called i have no clue lol sorry if its dumb

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  • Reece Magic
    August 29, 2007
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    Not dumb at all. Cute actually. We should get together and do a collaboration or something. See if we can get you back on the horse and writing again. You're quite expressive, and so, taking away writing as a form of expression is a loss. Wish to read more works by you, for you are talented.