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Deeper and deeper into the valleys---

My nerves start simmering hot waves
My valves weave around the erotic platter
My lips never go dry as they absorb
the streaming  nectar  from the soul inside for ever

A SNAKE like thing starts eroding into the wet lakes
fuming erotic and exotic wonders all around
keep not idle like a damp squibb wetting the clothes
explode in all ways always exciting my moods like hurricanes
to probe into new world of sweet dreams deeper and deeper in chances

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 21, 2007
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    Nice! Thank you for entering and good luck. *rose* Storm