Everynight i cry myself to sleep,
Just thinking about you and me,
And how we use to be.
Everytime i close my eyes all i see is you,
No matter how hard i try,
You just wont leave my mind,
I can't stop thinking about you,
I thought you really loved me,
like i loved you.
But then i decided it was time
to leave you,
I thought you'd come back
but you never did.
They tell you if you love them
set them free,
And if they come back
it was meant to be,
Well you never came back,
so what does this mean,
We were never meant to be?
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also an old one
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Well now, I like this poem. The only problem is that it's as if I read it before. Difference is in your ending a a few lines in between. It's written often. You are in the phase of writing poems of love, or shall I say, lost love, sad love. You have a talent here, that just wants to burst out. This write, is good, for I like love poems. Your ending was very effective. I shall read another. -
bravo
Ah, a lover's lament as old as time! Nicely and deftly done here...fine poem...bravo... bravo..
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~~This is very sad and so full of emotion, i loved it a so much...your style is so crazy and i can totally relate to this poem that is why i love it so much you have great talent great job.... i cannot wait to read more from you..~~~
~in love in death~'i leave you with a rose
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