Life i like a river never flowing,
Love is like the oxygen we breathe,
Death is like the wind never stopping
why cant life be like a fairy tale come true,
why cant we all just get along, not killing and not dying,
Life is something we all want,
Love is something we all need,
Death is something we all fear
but with without neither of these
we have nothing at all!
Author notes
this is on of mine but its also on my old name if its still up..
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting, kind of conflicting and not much direction in it. You may want to revise it and read it out loud to see if you can improve on the flow. Just my suggestions though.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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