Rub yourself against me
let me feel you burst
my hunger's at it's peak
desperate for you I thirst.
Nipples peaked and ready
after your assault
move those hands all over
and enter my open vault.
My fire burns from deep within
the flames are getting higher
as from my core I drip for you
come, thrust in your desire.
Plunging deep within, you liquefy
as I also suddenly erupt
a maelstrom of such driving force
nothing will disrupt.
Both shudder as these urges
refuse to quell the fires
for both of us ride with greed
as we move in rhythm, higher and higher.
A contest entry
- Think You Can Make Me Explode? by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended August 21, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Raw and passionate. Love the imagery. Thank you for entering and good luck. *rose* Storm
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mmmmmmm
So much passion burning within your words...amazingly honest needs, just waiting to be filled. Good luck in the contest but somehow I don't think you'll need it
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wow this was hot and steamy and very very vivid
it was extremly sensual
and just wow
lol
i loved it
well done gran and best of luck
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