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Alright

Add the tinted lippy,
And at first glance you might think that I’m
Alright,
Please don’t look too closely or you’ll see the fresher
Flaws,
Which don’t fit the excuses of a fabricated
Past.
My actions crave attentions of a superficial few
U Dreamer
U Believer
You should but still you shouldn’t
Though I never lied to you, you are alone.

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  • Mozarts funeral gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    This is a very interesting piece! I like it a lot! thank you for the honesty when you read my poetry! that's extremely fresh in the contest world of AP! Can you explain the first line? I don't really know what a Lippy is? ha ha