Feel the rush,
Feel it seep into you.
Taste the glory,
The lithal snow as it evaporates reality.
As you fade away into fantasy,
Holding on to the feeling of power.
Letting go of the constant pain,
Releasin the inner torture.
Blow your money on blow,
To feel you heart race.
You know the poison is flowing within,
Yet you can't let go of the plesurable sin.
Another line and I'll be fine,
Another three and I'll be better.
You rise up, flying amongst the clouds,
Watching heaven glitter.
No more anger,
No more fear.
No more sobs,
No more tears.
You are all and nothing,
Your eyes see what they need to.
Line after line you drift away,
They beg you to stop, still it's the only way.
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this is about cocaine addiction
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You should quit that shit, it isn't good, just drop it, you don't need that shit inside you, you're better then that, all it does is drag you down even further, it's not an answer or a solution, it masks the problem till the rush is over then when the buzz is gone, your deeper then you were to begin with, my advice? Drop it before it takes total control, I know that somewhere inside you, you're battling back, kick it, make everyone proud of you, kick the cravings and be a better person
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My brother was once addicted to cocaine and he said that is it the magnificence of everything that kept him attracted to it.
The feeling that everything was excellent and that you were invinsible.
Well written, excellent flow!
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yeah man so real i like this it really comes across well a good relevent title,
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i like it. it is very different the way you wrote it. like others have said, it has a strange calmness to it. and its easy to read. in a way i relate, not with the lines.. but with something else. so yes, very well written... keep it up.
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Hm
That was very beautifully written and it flowed so nicely. It also had an odd calmness to it.
Great job, I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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Pretty descriptive poem. I like the way it is structured. Fine rhymes. Coke is not the worst drug but a powerful one. Like any bad addictions, if u put your mind into it you can kick the habit. Drugs will cost you a lot including your life. There is always a spiritual foundation which help to be fearless and safe to strenghten us in the path of restoration. I like your words fantasy/power/heaven glitter is all about numbing the pain in trying to make it real. Your poem is highly powerful and i feel it gives the necessary strenght to fight it. Prayer is as powerful believe it or not.
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i know how powerful of a hold drugs can have on you. i hate thinking about those days now, but you wrote this in such a wonderful way. this is an awesome write.
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*Big Soft Hug *
My dear sweet friend Tasha I admire and repspect your courage for writing on such a powerful subject matter. I have bene throiugh those days and I know exactly what cocaine does to you. Man oh amn when I was 14 and 15 I was dating a drug dealer and she was my supplier long story short she always gave me that and I always sucke dit up as if it were a new candy and man I tell ya its not a good life style to have. Its extremely hard to break but you know deep in your wasted brain it feels like you can't stop the habit but you can! the best way to break a habit of this caliber is to surround yourself with loved ones and others who have been there and well ya got the idea let them support you in the good tgimes and the bad times and in the dark times like this. your addiction foes not control you tyoiu control it. I know depe down that you will break this habit. It may be an addiction and you must have it all the tim ebut in thre end you'll realize that you don't need it. Big
for ya take care tasha I like you my friend and I always will because you're a sweet down to earth person who respects others 
hang in there and always know you're enver alone. Sincerely, Paul
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Hey babe, I love this poem. It's great and powerful. Cocaine is a very powerful drug and you wrote about it beautifully. I always love all of your poems you always were and still are an amazing author and still improving very well. Keep writting your very talented and Im always here for you
I love you so very much dont you ever forget that!!!
~Chrissy~
xoxoxoxoxox
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