Skin upon skin
The heat builds
Burning my mind with sin
Oh sweet lust
What hold have you taken
The fire you placed inside
Could never be extinguished
To feel such rough hands
Sends shivers of pleasure down my spine
To hear such sensual whispers
Makes my body crave for yours all the more
Throbbing and aching for you
The pleasure mounding with every hot kiss
Take me now!
I am yours
Fill me with all you have
Drown me with your passion
Let me sink into it...
I'm about to explode
From the fire between us
A contest entry
- Think You Can Make Me Explode? by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended August 21, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Steamy and sensual. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck. *rose* Storm
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the first stanza is amazing, wow factor right there
i love the "burning my mind with sin" 
great poem. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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This really makes me miss my deployed marine
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