Goodbye, Dobby
you were a good guy
too bad that we
had to have you die.
You were the coolest
you were the bravest
but yet it was so bad
to have you die.
Ole bitch Bellatrix had to
stab you in the heart.
She had no idea that she
would soon fall apart.
You got what you deserved, Bella,
but Dobby, you were a good fella,
and it was so bad to have you go,
but you were avenged by Molly Weasley
for she killed Bella with her wand,
and she did it oh so easily.
Here lies Dobby, a free house elf,
the very, very greatest of them all.
Here lies Dobby, a free house elf,
for he just could not watch Harry fall.
Author notes
Here is my try at your contest... it kind of reminded me of his death, which was not a cool thing, since I really started hating bitch Bellatrix again!
I hope you enjoy this piece and feel the emotion I put into it for Dobby.
A contest entry
- NOOOO!!!! DOBBY!!!! by Dalawa.
410 points, ended August 24, 2007, 8 entries
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now Im gonna start crying again. Bad Rowling!!! Very bad!!
But good write and keep it up
Claire-Anne -
B+
Good poem. I hated that part about Dobby dying myself. Why couldn't he live? And Bellatrix, well, she got what she deserved, though I wish it was at the hands of Neville. It was sad that he had to die. And you penned a good poem here, I bet, in the spur of the moment for this contest. Talented you are, talented you are. -
Great poem! I did enjoy it and feel the emotion
For some reason, these are my fave lines: "You got what you deserved, Bella, but Dobby, you were a good fella"
Over all, nice flow...Excellent! -
SOB! that bitch killed Dobby! How the HELL could that have happened! I HATE that DUMB bitch! SHIT! First she killed Sirius then Dobby! OMG! HATE HER SHE IS EVIL!
Damn Straight Mrs.Weasley!
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O.O DOBBY DIES!!!????? OH NO! I like this poem but now I'm crying cuz Dobby is dead....T_T I loved that little house elf. may he rest in peace.
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