Led through webs of anticipation,
flames licking your unholy crevice.
To be speared by danger's dagger,
brought to your knees with sinister intent.
Hellish claws take your flesh,
sweet upon the devil's tongue.
Pierced by immortal bite,
and eyes of lust, you are drawn.
Forever in his lair, upon his beckon call,
where you've succumbed as his wicked mistress.
Author notes
Hell, of course!
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A contest entry
- Heaven or Hell, Secude me!!! (Adult) by Riftkin.
450 points, ended September 8, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Stormy your so good
YOu may have some fooled but not me - your an angel in disguise- pure sweet and well almost innocent
Congrats on the Bronze
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I love this, and as a bad girl myself, this sounds lovely. I so love this thank you.
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well done, You might have at least tried the light a little
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somehow I think the devils in trouble.
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WOW!
You make me shiver..Veru well done...
All the best!
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Whoa,
You go girl with your bad self, lol..
I hope you know by now, I'm a big fan of your works. This is another amazing masterpiece. Thanks for sharing, much love and tenderness. Bro Timothy~ xo 
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You do make it sound so delectable and inticing! I like the pull that this has while reading it. Good luck in the contest
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