In a moment,
Our hands intertwined
In every way together
As our lips bind.
Yet I might as well be distant;
Maybe in another time.
Baby, I was there for you.
Always said you knew the truth,
And I'm too damn confused.
Maybe it's just me
Or maybe I'm being used
And yes, it may kill me,
But in the end, your gunna lose
Baby, I would have been good for you, too.
No, I'm not complaining,
Just trying to realize.
Make myself see past your truth
And beyond your lustful eyes.
I guess I had my reasons
For believing charming lies...
Now, baby, I free myself from you
Goodbye
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a great song...
I believe this has the making of a very good song here. great rhythm and beat even without note. as for the title, I think it should be something to flavor of ...Baby I was good for you...
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good poem filled with emotion and a flow that was great. nice work. i can kinda relate to what i see here which is a plus for any reader that can do that. as for a title i like weird or a little different titles that grab the readers eye so i came up with this:
"Baby, Meet My Friends, Good and Bye"
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Wow, so many times love makes you blind, but this poem seems to see. great write, I really liked the middle of it. Keep it up!
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