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My Hero's

Donatello, the ninja with the purple bandana
He fights with his staff

Leonardo, the ninja with the blue bandana
He fights with his katanas

Michelangelo, the ninja with the orange bandana
He fights with his nunchakus

Raphael, the ninja witht he red bandana
He fights with his sais

Together they are the ultimate fighting team
Meating them is my ultimate dream
I've been a fan since I was a little boy
Everytime I go to buy a new toy
It's gotta be a ninja turtle
No contest especially when the opponent is squirtle
They are the most elite team of fighters
Teenaged turtles destroying evils desires
They keep beating the Shredder
Even when he comes back better
With more power and new sidekicks
The turtles come out with new tricks
Thats why they are my hero's
Everyone else is considered a zero



Author notes

This is for a contest on the best Ninja's/Hero's in the world...the teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.

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  • Vagabond
    September 25, 2007
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    Okay! Contest Closing Time!

    I'd like to say that I had alot of fun on this one, and it was very cool to find so many TMNT fans out there. As always, it would have been more fun of a HUNDRED people had entered... but still, i was surprised by the number of secret teenage mutant ninja turtle geeks that did come out of the woodwork.
    Everyone did a great job anyways, and it was hard to choose the trophy winners. In the end though, i did my best.

    Thanks for entering all, and (of course) Kowabunga


    p.s... why is there no TMNT group on Allpoetry? *insert sighs of unfulfilled desire*


  • Andrew Bernau
    August 30, 2007

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    Argggggggg! My Eyes!

    Dude, ya know you're like a brother to me, that's why I can tell you...fix the background! The contrast between the background and the text is making my eyes bleed! There is blood coming from my tear ducts man! Blood! That is not freaking normal!

    And as always, spellcheck wouldn't hurt,
    Peace out


  • Vagabond
    August 20, 2007

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    rofl! Good work on this entry! I enjoyed reading it. I think maybe you could have expanded their intros a bit, but other than that you did excellent work. Thanks for entering, and good luck! Feel free to enter another if the fit takes you!