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The Thief

Yes i know where do you stand
in the eyes of our kith and kin
and friends and close relatives
when we do fail in keeping to our promise/words

When you can't accomodate others feelings
say so immediately with out delaying the answer
when you can't oblige  invitation. for some reason or other
confirm it by a word with out post poning things as usual

Do you know the said norm in usual  terms my dear!
PROCRASTINATION IS THE REAL THIEF OF LIFE! REMEMBER!!!

Author notes

DELAY OR DEFERRING MEANS A LOT

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    I can see procrastination as "the thief" of life. It does steal the time away for important things to be accomplished in other words that will probably go by the wayside until it has to be done. I'm guilty of that whole heartedly. At least I know I'm not alone after posting this contest(lol). I want to thank you for entering my "The Procrastination Station" contest.

    Ted E


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 11, 2007
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    well done! Good luck!


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 21, 2007

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    I kept wondering throughout the poem--who is this thief?
    Then your wonderful poem lead up to the answer--well written with a great ending. Good luck in the contest!