I looked at you
I won't give up
First dance
First glance
First wish
First love
One chance
One love
One moment
All or nothing
Taking a risk
Won't forget
Blushing cheeks
Racing heart
Nervous thoughts
Ready to know
Seconds pass
Joy comes
Love conquers all,
Talk about a true romance.
Author notes
Not only a few of my ideas, but a good portion of my feelings, almost a story, except the middle hasn't happened yet.
A contest entry
- For Poets With 15 Trophys Or Less Only by Mercury Rising.
600 points, ended August 22, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie ~ Pick Your poison ~ Taking Pre-writes by blondone.
425 points, ended September 1, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What is heartbreak to you/ love reborn. by LadyKate.
355 points, ended September 15, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This poem is really sweet. Thank you for entering and good luck
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nice writing great job thank for entering and good luck
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A really delightful little poem you have penned. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
David
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Great write!!!!! I loved how you took few words and made a big statement!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!!!!!!!!!!
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wow this is cool. since it's kindof a poem and a bunch of title suggestions in one, thats neat. i'll take the three lines i like best to consider for my poem, since there are so many, and to be fair to the others. thanks =)
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Great work, as always. I like this one escpecially. Flows nice until the very end, and it goes out with a bang! Great!
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wow this is sooooooo emotional and strong. great write i think you did a wonderful job protraying your thoughts and feelings into this masterpiece
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