soaring with the delicate breeze
i chirp and call for my mate
gliding through farmland
honeysuckle scents abound
listening for my lovers chirp
flying free on towards my destiny
landing down on my cattail perch
under shade I call for my love
drowning out the other birds
so i can hear so clear for her
a wind kicks up i hear a lovely call
its my soul-mate she cries for me
leaving my perch with a fabulous flap
meeting my lover with a caressing kiss
we fly together in this glorious spring
amongst the fields as far as the eye can see
Author notes
Nature freewrite
A contest entry
- Fly like a bird by Sonja.
1210 points, ended August 25, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Woo Hoo Congrats on Gold This is an amazing write
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Simple. clear and vivid interpretation of bird's love makes this poem to fly easy like the feather into the sky.
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Beautiful nature love-song poem. I like how each stanza brings the reader into the picture with the images. Good luck in the contest!
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Oh what vivid imagery in this love this
Great Job with this piece honey
good luck in the contest.
Delila
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Wonderful
Oh my so vivid and great descriptions. Really done so well. Best of luck in the contest.
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Awwwwww I love this it is very sweet.
My favorite lines are :
a wind kicks up i hear a lovely call
its my soul-mate she cries for me
leaving my perch with a fabulous flap
meeting my lover with a caressing kiss
we fly together in this glorious spring
amongst the fields as far as the eye can see
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