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I can't breathe without you anymore
I loved you, that's for sure
I have a sickness with a name,
but I haven't a cure,
for my broken heart

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This poem was inspired by the song, "October" by Evanescence. Sorry if it suckz!

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  • Imperfect Beauty
    September 3, 2007
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    you did right to put it out there, it is very powerful.


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    August 30, 2007
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    Tragic beauty in these few lines of verse...sad, yet truth...nicely written.... ~jeremi

  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    August 20, 2007

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    I have a sickness with a name, but I haven't a cure...I love those lines, they speak so much pain and brokenness...


  • Lost-Lezzy-15
    August 20, 2007
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    I don't think this is my best work, but I decided to put it out there!