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santa don't like me now

poloroid of prozac in
a fifty dollar smile
all you people get back in
and try stay on a while

artificer building something
pectitoralay
mary mary quite contrary
gave it up today

fly on by those
silver dreams
golden schemes
child like screams

the night mares
riding through the night
you should just head on
go take flight

hefty trendy tote bag
twenty gallon smile
if you keep on dreaming
dream me for a while

drinking thinking
undulating in you time
i can't find a rythm
cause i'm outa rhyme

get you out of bed until
santa comes round here
you are very nice but youve been
naughty the last year

did you get those extra points
from being extra fine
drinking down a thick white lie
mixed with your red wine

if you feel it shifting
then i feel it's allright
the demons don't come round here now
cause i take pills each night

God picks on me hits my heart
till i think i'm through
but then as soon as i break down
again i see what's true

bloodied christmas stockings
on the mantle care
too bad santa caught you
taking off your 'underwhere'

Author notes

this is one of them weird ones

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  • draagyn
    August 21, 2007

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    lol. quite ... entertaininly odd. and odd in a different way cuz you can interpret things in weird ways..hehe


  • dustookie2
    August 20, 2007

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    I wanna hear this being belted out over the air waves....the minute i started to read this i felt the music playing the background and i never read the lines they sang to me.....lyrical for sure I can only give you clappy people would like to give more this is one awesome write babe weird but frigging brilliant.I stand in applause


  • ShInE45DoWn
    August 20, 2007
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    YES! MORE VH STUFF!