Night is upon us, they found where we dwell,
"The mortal army attacks!", my scouts did yell.
rushing to my throne, shouting my commands,
chaos is swarming, my legions now stand.
Smoke from the horizon, from torches in hand,
the shouts of mortals, upon the land.
My army now stands, a thousand strong,
with swords and shields, singing the death song.
Hurump... hurump... hurump...
the mortals now come,
swinging there weapons,
sounding their drums.
"ADVANCE!!!", was the cry,
my general had yelled,
"Advance and send these mortals to hell!"
Upon my steed, with sword held high,
I rode into battle, "All mortals must die!"
Knocked to the ground, feeling no pain,
wounded, yet healing, it started to rain.
My legion is losing, they fall through the night,
dawn is approaching, I must quickly take flight.
My people now scattered, I retreat to a cave,
await the outcome, my legion was brave.
The sounds turn to victory, for the mortals this time,
but soon I'll return, and avenge this crime...
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Quite.
Vengece?
Angry.
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This is great. I love vampire writes and I love poems that rhyme. So this one is now a favorite. Great write.
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Wow
This remids me of those old war poems that teachers would make you read in history class for the Civil War and such. Except yours are fantasy and this is amazing. Keep up the awesome work, this write was wonderful!
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This is wonderfully enthralling. I have loved them all and this one is no exception. The rhyme and flow are so smoothly done that it reads quickly like the battle being fought. Loved it. Now don't take to long to write the next one.
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Wicked!
You really know how to pull your reader in
As intense and gripping
as ever.
Now waitng for the next.
Hugs ~onesugar~
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