&& there's nothing to us ,
but our tall tale hearts.
Darling your poisonous voice
is still ringing threw my heart.
Inject me with some more of your
cocaine love.
It's an addiction
I must admit..
Your miles away,,
And we haven't talked in months
But minutes after I left you
I was torn apart.
I can't belive that stupid bitch
she tore ua apart
Why // how could she hate you
your flawless,,
Your touch was electirc
back seat romance was the bst we ever had..
but still it was exllent
it's what kept me alive
But now I that I can't touch you
my heart is waying me down..
ever since I couldn't hold you
My blood running dry.
my mom she never liked you
,..
she despised you
she hated me growing up
so she dragged me away in the middle of the night,,
im sorry she did that
its not what i had planned
i would of married you,,
but now your moving on
......
Author notes
kaydee i love you so much,, i miss you and im so sorry,, theres so much more i wanted to say but i jjust couldnt, im sorry,, i love you i really do,, please forgive me,, and promise me youll never forget me,,, and im sorry that i havent msged you or anything much ,, ive been un packing and cleaning,, you know my moms been keeing me buisy to keep me away from you ,, again im sorry and i love you,,,,,
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ooo its nice xD me likes it... i dont know what else to say xD... tis beautiful
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Omg u made me cry,, hun thats so sweet,, and amazing and well writting, and omg i donteven know what to say ,,,
thAnk u so muxh for writting this for me,, it was beautiful
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omg ray this was so fucking beautiful!!! it's me melissa, ive missed you my friend and i wish you would get on more!!! damn, ray, you should come back for her and marry her!!!! lol, drag her off!!! god, that's so fucking beautiful and it made me all teary eyed!!! =]
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