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Infatuation in love!

After
Today’s rain in
The evening refreshed
One and all, I stepped out for
A walk!

Wet is
Grass green,
As water fall on earth
In drops pearly pretty from
The leaves!

Clouds
White in the sky
Retreat like army that
Won the war on weather hot, of
Summer!

Water
Flowing fast, out
Of the rose garden, by
My house, the droplets on petals
Shine!

I saw
Suddenly an
Angel with hair
Golden, so long ,touching her knees:
Smiling!

Her eyes
Emerald like,
Wearing dark blue gown,
Body with golden  glow , she
Greeted!

Like in
A dream I felt,
My thoughts flying sky high,
As if she was a divine gift
Of love!

Hurried
To her running
With heart beat high,smiling,
Only to know , infatuation
That is!










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Love is intoxicating and mesmerising leading to infatuation , sometimes!

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  • Whispering Wind gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    BREATH TAKING

    your soft sweet words play gently upon the senses...the pictures you have painted across your canvas of words holds the heart ever so softly...thank you kind sir for sharing  the moment with me


  • Marlo Thomas
    September 1, 2007

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    Your words divine of full imagery that gives a picture of this place. A wonderful poetic hand has written this beauty.


  • ceegeeess
    August 22, 2007
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    Thank you my friend Angelica for your nice comment on mypoem. I value yourcomments always.


  • ceegeeess
    August 22, 2007
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    Thank you dear Renee! I am soglad that you liked my poem, "infatuation inlove', with respect, ceegee


  • poetryality silver member
    August 22, 2007
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    What a beauteous work of poetry this is my friend. I too see angels, I am in awe when I do. You description of this angel is vivid and keen of eye. I have missed your musing, and I am glad that I stopped by today to get a glimpse of your vision. Simply beautiful!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • angelica silver member
    August 22, 2007

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    Lovely CG, Your poetic words are very beautiful.
    It's lovely when it rains, everything smells so fresh and clean. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
    Joan


  • raggyann
    August 20, 2007
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    oh this is amazing you did me a great honor
    thank you my friend

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