every year thst passes by,
you seem to be growing younger
filling yourself with wise things,
to fullfill your knowledge hunger
you are the immortal candle
that blows the candles on the cake,
you are the wisest figure,
the creator did ever make
in the empty world,
a precious stone you are
in the darkened sky,
you are a shining star
and all i wish,
is brighter and better you stay
and as great as ever,
be your wonderful birthday ...
Please tell me what you think
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"you are the wisest figure,
the creator did ever make " those lines really stuck with me througout the poem. This truly is amazing. As I go it just makes me wish this would never end. I do hope that my birthday is as good as this. Though, I do see a few errors with capitalization. Thats. it. Thanks for entering, I wish you the best of luck.
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