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Amber

a journey to the furthest height,
brings me joy of loves delight.
i see her hair, and heavens eyes,
she radiates, my souls surmise.
her amber waves i stop to stare,
and in her golden light i dare...

dare to deviate,
it's her i hold.
her body colse, the one i cloak,
and in her midnight light i choke.
im back again,
and she is there.
nothings wrong,
we are a pair.

Author notes

rhyming scheme is a little off there... added those two lines for... well, cause it sort of helps with the transition and because i wanted to.

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