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Dishy Petra

Her pink silluette an nimrod shadow
Cast a Thane of Cawdor memory
Upon the adjacent walls fountain
The sun seemed to shimmer pink
Within the spurted trikle.

The dish seemed to cultivate
A pink residue refracted
by the sun's dominant ray
cast upon a magma metal
Within onomise legs.

Petra throughout the day
Cultivated the rays story
cast upon the meditation
of inverted liquid simply
a summarized message.

The End of the Day.

Although the pink subsided
And the refracted shadows
Legacy avoided the
Artificial wall. Nature
Multiplied every drop.

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  • Judith Chandler
    December 12, 2007
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    Does the Thane of Cawdor refer to memories of blood? Interesting write.


  • ea silver member
    August 20, 2007

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    This is predictably inventive and strange. It's always fun to get your take on things. Thank you. P.S. What is onomise?