As I sit here in detention,
my mind swimming with invention,
slowly I lose all attention,
along with all knowledge retention.
My head is swimming,
my mind is shattered;
my IQ is dimming,
as if that mattered.
My mouth is drooling,
I regret the ruling,
made by the authority,
to change my priority.
So ever my friends,
heed my plea;
don't spend your days,
in this place like me.
A contest entry
- "Your Favorite Prewrite" by Virgoan.
500 points, ended September 3, 2007, 103 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me laugh by lilblueeyesmine1978.
425 points, ended September 20, 2007, 37 entries
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Comments
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Very Cute
thansk for entering and i hope to read more from you soon. this was very cute. i have spent quite a bit of time in detention. had fun though.
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Nicely written poem
Thanks so much for participating in my contest. I wish you all the best. I encourage you to keep on writing my friend.
>>>VIRGOAN -
good
some lines need metric help...like the rhymes though
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