Savouring you, I absorb you
As I enjoy the spiciness of your aroma
Nervously, breathing in your mellow scent
Pictures you arouse excite me, making my heart rush
Like an electircal current charging through me
You are my lover, a handsome man
How you stimualte me, as you touch my velvety skin
A breeze of pleasure brushes over me
Your downy feathery kisses make me catch my breath
Lingering you caress and suck my breasts
Leaving a lustrous sheen, my nipples erect
Gliding your hands over the fullness of my curves
Teasing me, you slide your hand between my moist welcoming thighs
My rapaciousness for you deepens, as you caress my swollen pearl
Body alert in readiness of feeling you deep within
Moving between my thighs you slide your erectness into my sultriness
Breathless, I raise my hips to allow you to enter me deeper
Making love your pace quickens, sensations soar
Bodies entwined, twisting, muscles tighten, orgasm, breathless sighs
A contest entry
- Im in the mood for love by mantis180.
700 points, ended September 23, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a good piece, I like the way you worded it, and the descriptive phrases you used. Well done.
-Ash -
The deper the better, Sweet Sugar!
And i'm a handsome man with the right stuff to go deeper than any man has gone before! GOOD LUCK in the contest with this sweet, sensual, heartfelt, and OH SO 'SOULFUL' piece! As always - you have pleased me and made me a HAPPY and VERY HARD man!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
Here come three fellows who coundn't go as deep as me no matter how hard that they tried!
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STUNNING
WOWOWOW!!!!!! STUNNING WRITING HERE, SUGAR. LOVED IT. THE IMAGERY IS SUPERB. WONDERFUL FLOW AS WELL. KEEP IT UP! YOU POURED YOUR ALL INTO THIS.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE
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oooooohhhhllallalllllllaaa
Now you know Im Loving this sugar....spicy and indeed sexy...great job
Epif
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Oh..deep. I love it. Its beautiful as well as you.
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