For all the times I spend alone
I spend them thinking of only him
His eyes
The most gorgeous I’ve ever seen
His smile
Always makes me happy
His hugs
Make me weak at the knees
His voice
Makes me want to close my eyes
And listen all night long even if the message is pointless
Because it’s just so soothing and calming
Looking at him
Thinking of him
Makes me weak
I almost fall to the ground
Taller he stands, holding me
His breath in my ear, his kisses on my neck
It all makes my heart almost stop
A moment I cherish
Forever and always will I remember
Exactly how he smelled
Exactly how the stars and moonlight made him look
Exactly how he held me
Exactly how his hands made me shiver
Exactly how his lips tasted
And exactly how perfect I felt being with him
When I’m with him
Everyone else disappears
I only see him
I only hear him
I only wish to stay with him
I’m falling for him
And I’m falling fast
But I know, no matter how hard I fall
He’ll always be there to catch me
Author notes
First poem ever actually dedicated to someone sorta. It's for Dalton.
A contest entry
- I Found It! Have you? by Nicole Cudworth.
900 points, ended November 6, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Eh, iz alright
Comments
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Congratulations on being able to write about such a profound emotion... for some reason I just cannot ever seem to get the words right when I sit down to write. Beautifully done and I can honestly say that I know this feeling well and I wish you all the love and luck you can endure!
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thank you very much.
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omg....laneys right...it's so sweet...i love it....your a great writer...can't wait to read more...
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AWE
Its SOOOO cute!! I Love it its sooo sweet!! i love your poems!!
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